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Week4

2008-10-19T18:32:00.000-07:00

How the education lift people out of the poverty?
by the education, people learn about basic life of global. and they can get a job by the education and that make their country improve. and that's the way of how people can out of poverty.

2008-10-16T18:58:00.000-07:00

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Hi, my name is Seymour Spell, and I'm student of savannah, my school lotate at the Georgia which one of the stateof U.S.A. I took 5 subject every day, not at weekend. usually our school start 8:00 AM. and we have short break

dictionary

2008-09-23T10:58:00.000-07:00

reader- one who publicly recites literary works

page - a single piece of paper used for writing

sidebar- a typographically distinct section of a page

themes- a topic of discussion or discourse

post- a bring to public notice

orange- reddish-yellow color

blog- online diary

tag line- the lat line of play, story, speech

comment- a remark

2008-09-23T10:46:00.000-07:00

obituary

2008-09-21T19:22:00.000-07:00

Steven Choi died jun 6, after a electronic shocked
Born March 10, 1991 in Seoul, Korea, lived most of his life in Seoul until end of 2005. 2006, he moved to Savannah GA, . He is died at the high school. byelectronic shocked.
He is survived by daughter and son-in-law Kay and Ronnie Viers. he is also survived by his niece (ward) Judy Steele and special friend Ron James. There are 13 other nieces and nephews and several great nieces and nephews.
The memorial services will be held at 11:00 am, Friday, Jun 20th at Alley Memorial Presbyterian Church
Memorials may be made to Hospice of Alley, Inc., 146 Main Street, Anywhere, USA 12543.

poem

2008-09-21T19:00:00.000-07:00

I am normal guy who likes school
I try escape the school
I climb the wall in the backyard
I got shocked on the top of the wall
I can't move my body
I kick the wall and fall down to the ground
I see the sky and it is red

I see my friend
I see my friend who got shocked after me
I see my friend vibrateing on the wall
I see my friend saved by teacher
I see the car which took me and my friend to the hospital
I see doctor who is really surprised
I see my mom crying
I feel sorry but I can't talk

article

2008-09-21T18:44:00.001-07:00

"Students got an electrical shocked at the school"

On August 13th, student 'Steven Choi' and other friends got an electrical shockat school. Teacher James Spell said he heard screaming in the backyard of the school. When he ran to check on it, he saw that five student fallen down on the floor. school authorities are not know why this tragedy occured. Police said the student may have been playing near the wall next to an next to an elctronic pole. the ectronicity may have leaked from there.

two of the student are still in comas and the other three students have been released from hospital. Doctor Jay," said fortunatly they have no brain damage, but two students broke their arms are broke his rib. From this information, police suppose that "student fell down from the top of the wall".
Police will keep investigations this accident, and police said advise everyone to not play near the ecletronic devices. especillay when it is raining because it is more easy to get an electronic shock.

Short story

2008-09-17T08:45:00.000-07:00

There is a lazy student named Steven Choi. who really doesn't want to go to school, but he has no choice. After school he go academy everyday. It is miserable for him. One day Steven and few of his friends tried to escape the academy. They study four hours, and there is twenty minute break times, so they make plan and try and escape the day. They don't feel guilty because it is just one day.
The next day it is raining. they feel bad, but they stick with their plan. first problem is the building. It is blocked by 16 feets wall on all 4 sides, and at the door there is a security man. there is just one way to get out of there, climb the wall. But it is really high, so it is impossible to jump. Fortunatly there is an electric pole near the wall, they try to go down the pole. one of his friends make it, Steven start to go down next, but suddenly, he get electrocuted. He can't move. his body vibrates. his friends know dont know what happend. they watch steven vibrate and start yelling and complaing about him no moving.
Steven thinks it is the most dangerous moment in his entire life. He thinks many things in just one second. e finds hecan move one leg, so he kicks the wall. He falls down to the ground. under the wall, there is a pond so he survives, but Steven is almost out of his mind after that. He sees one of his friend get electorocted too teachers come and take them to the hospital. They are alive, but they spend a week in the hospital .

introduction

2008-09-09T10:44:00.000-07:00

hi. im tell about my misery experience. about my electronic shock. i electronic shocked one times.
it was really not good moment for me i saw star and sun at that time..

2008-09-08T19:33:00.000-07:00

my 5 genres

2008-09-08T19:06:00.000-07:00

1. Short story: if i write my experience with short story. then i can explain my experience reallt detail. also reader can feel like readers' experience. that's why im write short story.

2. poem: with poem i can express experience by condese my work. which mean with poem we cna not write long like a story so we have to express our thinking by short and condense. and i can show the rythem.

3. cartoon: which the most effective way what i can make humor with my experience. with cartoon i can show my bad experience by opposite way with humor.

4.article: article is part of magazine or newspapaer. so it is really objective and expertative. that mean with article genre i can report my experience by fact, true

5.obituary: for real, im not dead. but at the obtuary let's suppose we are dead and then write. with obituary i can show my experience really nicely. which mean my experience is really miserly so it is really match well.

hihihi

2008-09-08T19:04:00.001-07:00

hey welcome to my blogs.